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Go Lewis, I love that you have a creative sentence about the rhino and that you have a unique and catchy title. It made me want to find out what the post was about. By adding 'into the sunset' you have even included when this happened. I wonder what it was like for the little kid on the rhino? I don't know if I could hang on to a rhino! Could you? Ngā mihi, Kōkā Maria
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Go Lewis,
ReplyDeleteI love that you have a creative sentence about the rhino and that you have a unique and catchy title. It made me want to find out what the post was about. By adding 'into the sunset' you have even included when this happened.
I wonder what it was like for the little kid on the rhino? I don't know if I could hang on to a rhino! Could you?
Ngā mihi,
Kōkā Maria